Sunday, January 4, 2009

The Batmobile. Comments

Rating: 4.7

you took me to school
and you brought me back,
now that ure gone i wonder were you're at,
you didnt have style,
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JOSE MURGUIA
car
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Mari Velazco 12 August 2009

lol reminds me of my cousins car its a crappy car so he parks it far away from all the other cars nd wen u ask him why he saids cause he doesnt want someone 2 scratch it and it has a thousand of scratchs lol but i love this poem

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B3LL4 M3D! N4 02 March 2009

dats really good poem 4 a car....

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Nancy Chambers 20 February 2009

Are you sure this is about a car and not a lost loved one? If it is only a car I have a 'silver streak'

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Goth Fairy 14 February 2009

it's a good poem. i liked it a lot.

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Ken Suh 13 February 2009

lol this is good ;) lol I've never heard a peom on a car but hey its nice :)

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Jessica Waskelis 13 February 2009

NICE funnie! ! never read one abut a car but awsome! !

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Patti Masterman 19 January 2009

This is a great piece of writing. At first I was confused that it was about a person, the writing is so clever. I'm surprised more people aren't sentimental about their first cars (75 Nova! I miss it)

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Karen Palero 16 January 2009

lol! you are pretty sentimental, ain't ya? actually, if i didn't read your 'P.S.', i would really think that you're pertaining to someone whom you lost... well...this is so cute..(^_^)

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Jabria Carter 14 January 2009

i like this poem. i never had a batmobile either but i do have a mustang gt. i would trade that anyday for a batmobile

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~*emo*princess *~ 09 January 2009

hahaha thats funny but true

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i gave this a 10 to start you off, very creative.

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