you took me to school
and you brought me back,
now that ure gone i wonder were you're at,
you didnt have style,
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Are you sure this is about a car and not a lost loved one? If it is only a car I have a 'silver streak'
lol this is good ;) lol I've never heard a peom on a car but hey its nice :)
This is a great piece of writing. At first I was confused that it was about a person, the writing is so clever. I'm surprised more people aren't sentimental about their first cars (75 Nova! I miss it)
lol! you are pretty sentimental, ain't ya? actually, if i didn't read your 'P.S.', i would really think that you're pertaining to someone whom you lost... well...this is so cute..(^_^)
i like this poem. i never had a batmobile either but i do have a mustang gt. i would trade that anyday for a batmobile
i gave this a 10 to start you off, very creative.
lol reminds me of my cousins car its a crappy car so he parks it far away from all the other cars nd wen u ask him why he saids cause he doesnt want someone 2 scratch it and it has a thousand of scratchs lol but i love this poem