Tuesday, August 21, 2007

The Bath Thief Comments

Rating: 4.9

I don't care
people stare
and really want to laugh
a mystery
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Chuck Audette
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Shirley Woods 03 September 2009

Loved it Chuck - thanks for the tip - yours always bring a huge laugh - isn't that the best poetry in the world. Cheers

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Anna Russell 12 September 2007

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Hugs Anna xxx

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Brian Dorn 11 September 2007

Chuck, you've got a dirty mind... but you always manage to keep the poetry clean. This is among your very best! !

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Esther Leclerc 30 August 2007

Wat'er way to GO, Chuck! ! ! ! ! Maybe that rear was big enough to displace most of the volume? ! Really, reallllly hope there were no bubbles during that invasion... Shower away! Thanks for the heehee's, dear pal! ! ! Est : ]]]

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Ernestine Northover 22 August 2007

It's a lovely addiction though, isn't it! Somehow a shower is a poor substitute. I hope you are soaking this up, as I am agreeing with you, so you have at least one devotee, and that's a fact. Thoroughly quenched my thirst, this one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Danny Reynolds 22 August 2007

Rub a dub-dub poor Chuck's in the tub His face screams blue murder it's a butt-cheek disturber! I must say, this epic rather drained me. (Just loved the 'drownDED' part.) Danny

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Dee Daffodil 21 August 2007

LOL...So that's what you do at three in the morning when feedining a tiny person! ! LOL... Where do you get these wonderful ideas for poems? ! Terrific write! Hugs, Dee

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R H 21 August 2007

So you're not so squeaky clean after all? Another hilarious write from the master of wordplay. Overflowing with originality and humour - love it Chuck! Justine x

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John Thorkild Ellison 21 August 2007

Very polished. I like it. Very good indeed! !

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Scarlett Treat 21 August 2007

Word Master...No Cracks at all here. With love....the Giant Rear! !

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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