Tuesday, May 3, 2005

The Bath Comments

Rating: 4.0

Unworthy of my time or my glance
My hands plunged beneath the water
felt the coolness turn to ice and my skin began to sting
Washed myself of you and your foolish games
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Eloisa Gearhart
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Whitney Nicole Albright* 15 November 2008

Awesome. Great descriptions.

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Linda Preston 18 July 2005

Chilling stuff. I like line 1 verse 2.

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