Thursday, July 16, 2015

The Bashful Lover Comments

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I sat on a pavement waiting for her
But when she appeared I lowered my gaze
I guess she stood staring in great wonder
For my head was bowed like one in a daze
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Saviour Otubelu
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Captain Herbert Poetry 17 July 2015

Well done. A nice piece. Thanks for sharing

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 17 July 2015

nice piece, you expresse the scenario so well. Please read my poem 'Calculus Of A Life Time'

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Allotey Abossey 16 July 2015

You write well my friend... This is witty and sounds like many people's story

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