Friday, November 4, 2016

The Barquentine Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was staring at the horizon on
A clear and balmy day,
The sky was blue and the sea a type
Of aquamarine in the bay,
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David Lewis Paget
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Dr Pintu Mahakul 04 November 2016

Clear and balmy day still remains in mind of past memory. Blue sky and sea reflect sunset is amazing. Love wipes out pain of my life and I never feel pain gain. By the time I turn around. Barque has disappeared but still I remember and this is absolute mystery. Very interesting poem this is and nice one really.10

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David Lewis Paget

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