The Bark Comments

An impressive poem with a message. An incident in the life of a tree finally compels to see with a broad vision. All the world is a stage is that vision. Great thoughts. To reflect life from the perception of a tree or ocean is the real gift of a poet and you happen to be the one. Impressive indeed.

the carving of creativity

Rereading this again, I find their are layers that deserve greater reflection, one is always growing and the bark changes. You are a poet philosopher.

A well crafted poem in blank verse. Simply excellent...10++

Such an outstanding piece......thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

Coming out as Beauty..... Not as a place to visit but home itself. Beautiful nature by itself as a Home! Lovely read sir.

There is philosophical depth in the poem. Very nicely crafted to make it interesting reading. Loved it.

" Not as a place to visit but home itself" . You've owned the world in these words and it's beautiful. Keep writing for the same world. Great job

The poet's mastery of those poetic elements that capture a reader's mind is displayed here. A deep piece, I must say, but worthwhile. All the best, Yoonoos.

Amazing work, these lines reflect the depth of spiritual growth. The last stanza seals it perfectly showing this is your home. Much enjoyed! tfs

A comforting read Yoonoos, all life is interconnected and dependent on each others survival. Beautiful work.

A beautiful piece, portraying natures essence. The craft and dexterity in implored in this piece brilliant.

A poem of great depth with a meaningful message. Compelling imagery and beautifully crafted.

Prolific writing dear poet.

Deep sublime muse in abstract fashion. Superb imagery. Kudos. Plz do comment my newest poem too titled, ' pink mania inking'

This is beautiful, i like how you choose the subject, expand the idea and bust all with meaningful reveal from the start to the end. < 3

Yoonoos, dear poet, your poem on " The Bark" is so profound and philosophical. " carved me for the expansion of my self essence into a bark, I came out of my depth as beauty" ......... the blank verse is brilliant......10

Having come over here from mother's womb the universe is our home. Excellent tree metaphor. Deep 10+

I've spent some time in the woods examining nature, so I can relate to this piece. Great job!

A beautiful write of knowing one's home......thoughtfully penned.