The Bare Tree Comments

Heartfelt poem, neatly written in a descriptive style.....100 on 10.

Yasmeen's high imagination, lovely description and perfect personification has created a marvelous work of art. i

A beautiful descriptive write.

Yes, I agree totally, a fine written form, but already worn imagery. How about a refreshing insight on dying, anybody?

I totally agree. This is indeed a well written poem but already worn imagery. How about a new perspective on dying, anybody?

Great imaginary, emotional yet insightful sentiments!

picturesque and worded beautifully, your poem gives hope

Wow, this is wonderful. I really enjoyed very much reading this poem. It flows like a river, it sounds like music and it touches the heard. Excellent.

Glory to be Allah Praised the world of salvation the dryad nice

Beautiful description on life of a tree. Very well penned..Loved it Yasmeen.

A very powerful poem with beautiful rendering style. The diction is amazingly apt and a clean 10 out of 10 goes here for you Yasmeen

Beautifully descriptive of the life of a tree - very well written Yasmeen.

A beautiful poem Yasmeen. great imagery of trees.

Optimism beautifully portrayed through these lines... 'Yet I let not melancholy devour me I wait patiently for spring’s lively spree'

tone of the season in tune of the soul depicted within nature in every bright

Thanks, dear friend Zaynub.

I havent read a better masterpiece personification of d tree.. Jasmine! How u say n mean, 'leafy lap for nestlings', wow creative! Im so impressd by dis poem i vote 10, ah but yor poem wil b d evergreen tree.