Thursday, March 1, 2012

The Barbed Wire Bandage Comments

Rating: 5.0

Looking through the window
There is a broken heart
Cracked right down the center
Like broken fine china,
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Danny Draper
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Ruth Walters 22 August 2012

Poor, poor tortured heart, cruelly taunted, cut and bleeding teardrops of pain dripping on white parchment.

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Karen Deeks 10 March 2012

Oh my! Danny this is just headshakingly gorgeous. As I read aloud, my poetic voice sang to a beautiful throng.. Your descriptions are impeccable and a broken heart bound by barbed wire, just perfect... My favourite line as there is connection yet a severing line is (Just battle fields and hedges) sigh! ! A gorgeous piece of writing. Thanks Karen (didn't seem to load first time grrr.. Luckily I've learnt to save, if it appears twice I'm sorry)

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Karen Deeks 10 March 2012

Oh my! Danny this is just headshakingly gorgeous. As I read aloud, my poetic voice sang to a beautiful throng.. Your descriptions are impeccable and a broken heart bound by barbed wire, just perfect... My favourite line as there is connection yet a severing line is (Just battle fields and hedges) sigh! ! A gorgeous piece of writing. Thanks Karen

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Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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