Looking through the window
There is a broken heart
Cracked right down the center
Like broken fine china,
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Oh my! Danny this is just headshakingly gorgeous. As I read aloud, my poetic voice sang to a beautiful throng.. Your descriptions are impeccable and a broken heart bound by barbed wire, just perfect... My favourite line as there is connection yet a severing line is (Just battle fields and hedges) sigh! ! A gorgeous piece of writing. Thanks Karen (didn't seem to load first time grrr.. Luckily I've learnt to save, if it appears twice I'm sorry)
Oh my! Danny this is just headshakingly gorgeous. As I read aloud, my poetic voice sang to a beautiful throng.. Your descriptions are impeccable and a broken heart bound by barbed wire, just perfect... My favourite line as there is connection yet a severing line is (Just battle fields and hedges) sigh! ! A gorgeous piece of writing. Thanks Karen
Poor, poor tortured heart, cruelly taunted, cut and bleeding teardrops of pain dripping on white parchment.