Sunday, November 1, 2009

! ! ! The Banquet (Sonnet 89) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I tasted just a morsel of your feast
when tongue and fingers launched their fierce attack
upon your succulent buffet, released
at once between your lips, while on your back.
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Lorenzo Costigliolo
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Patti Masterman 18 November 2009

I agree with Sonya (hiding behind her shoulder; peeking at the..poem, lol) Not fair at all to have it all be someone else's feast. (smile)

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Sonya Florentino 05 November 2009

do you really need those 2 lines in the end...i guess you do cuz it's a sonnet...but after you've whetted my appetite! :)

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