I tasted just a morsel of your feast
when tongue and fingers launched their fierce attack
upon your succulent buffet, released
at once between your lips, while on your back.
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do you really need those 2 lines in the end...i guess you do cuz it's a sonnet...but after you've whetted my appetite! :)
I agree with Sonya (hiding behind her shoulder; peeking at the..poem, lol) Not fair at all to have it all be someone else's feast. (smile)