The Bait Comments

Its really a nice poem. In fact first our love makes us feel all enthuastic and then leaves alone to weep and cry. Yet its a pleasure.

Dont wait for her to say just say it urself, similes used nicely, good write

Very thoughtfully written

Then that can be your first day together! Cute

Beautifuly written Asif. You're extraordinarily prolific.

BEAUTIFUL WITH SWEET RHYMES

wonderful poem. The analogy between `sweet gestures' and `bait' reminds me metaphysical conceit. The very first line of the poem is really catching.

very romantic straight and simple. If I say I love you baby You may disappear in the sea That is very nice

i had one disappear, wait it won`t be to late, please read my new poem, , , I Wonder joseph

oo..what a great flow of the words. keep it up man.. really like it.. thumbs up...