Saturday, May 28, 2016

The Bags Under My Eyes Comments

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They emerged one Sunday afternoon
Inflated and heavily pregnant
Swollen with painful breaking news
A sudden downpour of sadness
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Kenneth Maswabi
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Pamela Sinicrope 28 May 2016

SO, is this a poem about aging..middle age, perhaps? Is this the moment when looks in the mirror and realizes that youth is slipping away and then there is an immediate (not quite yet conscious) reaction...a flooding of emotion, fear, thoughts about what one has accomplished in their lifetime and what has yet to accomplished as well? I think you've captured it...from the man's perspective.

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Kenneth Maswabi 28 May 2016

Thanks Pam, yes it is about aging...you are spot on with your analysis. i am blessed.

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Maun, Botswana
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