The Bag I Carried Poem by Sangavi -

The Bag I Carried

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The day I was born,
I met the one carrying many bags
And face filled with smile.
The one offered me a bag
Saying, 'Hold it tight -
Don't let it go
Until I return.'

In childhood,
The bag was filled with air -
Light, joyful, floating around.
I carried it everywhere,
Happy with its gentle weight.

In teenage years,
The air inside grew heavy
An unknown weight settled in.
I carried it because I had no choice
Though I longed to drop it,
A power from the one stopped me.

I saw everyone holding a bag like mine,
But mine always felt heavier -
Maybe they felt the same.

Years passed,
Adulthood arrived.
With hope the weight would ease,
The bag would fill with air once more.

But no -
The bag filled again,
Not with air, but with weight.
Some days heavy,
Some days light.
I held on with all my strength.

Days became fewer -
Few filled with air,
Many weighed down by heaviness.
It starts to weigh me down.

Sometimes it filled with air,
Only to fill with weight again.
I wanted to let go,
I couldn't hold it any longer.
It crushed me.

People advised -
'Don't let it go,
Soon it'll fill with air again.'
But the bag stressed me,
And I let it fall.

The one returned
No smile this time,
Only sadness filled in eyes.
The one asked me with sadness in voice
'Why did you let it go? '
I said,
'I can't hold on anymore
It weighs me down.'

The one said,
'The bag will fill with air again.'
But the sadness inside me happily said,
'I don't want the bag itself.'

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is a metaphorical journey through the stages of life, using a simple image — a 'bag' — to represent the emotional weight we all carry. From childhood joy to the invisible burdens of adulthood, the poem explores how that weight changes, deepens, and sometimes overwhelms. The " one" in the poem could symbolize fate, a parent, a higher power, or even a part of ourselves that insists we keep going. The piece touches on themes of mental health, emotional exhaustion, resilience, and the quiet desire for release. It's not just about giving up — it's about the silent battle between holding on and the longing for peace. Many may relate to the feeling of carrying something invisible yet incredibly heavy.
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