Wednesday, October 22, 2008
The Bad Thing Comments
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Mind closed, collapsed
Breath shortens
A violent gasp
To find a safe space
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Rachael LoudFingers
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7/20/2025 8:38:21 AM # 1.0.0
I particularly like this one. I like the style in which it's written. And I like how you say salty wetness instead of tears... so much more creative. I think I told you that before when you read it to me. By the way, you wrote 'all I heart is my heart' instead of 'all I hear is my heart.' Just letting you know!