Friday, June 2, 2006

The Bacon Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

me and Pedro had dees plan
to get around de INS man
so we snuck across de U.S border
but den got lost and out of order
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Chuck Audette
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Karen Sinclair 23 October 2012

OMG! ! ! ! lol..... hahaha! ! ! ! thanks a bunch, my heads killing me now from roaring and i mean roaring with laughter......the funniest thing i have read ever! ! ! i cannot stop mulling dis one oder! saved to read to me dad thanks

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Poetry Hound 07 July 2006

Aaaaaargh! You get a drummer's rimshot for the ending. But I must say, you had me hooked and I read the whole gosh darn stupid thing. Very funny.

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Hilariously idiotic (but not) . Well-structured and an entertaining read in every sense. Even to a vegetarian!

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Duncan Wyllie 08 June 2006

Very funny spin on this, laughing all the way, you tell them well Was is crispy bacon, Smells good from here! 10! , love Duncan

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Lea Simpson 07 June 2006

De pun iz not my favourite, but deez poem iz funnee (or should I say punee?) .

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Ernestine Northover 06 June 2006

My, My, My! Hi Ham so amused by this one. Certainly had a 'bang' at the end. The idea of a 'bacon tree' sounds great though. Love Ernestine XXX

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Anna Russell 03 June 2006

Oh Chuck, poor Erin! Just kidding - and smiling. Nice one. Hugs Anna xxx

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Dee Daffodil 02 June 2006

Groan.......but a good groan.....a kind of joyfull...Ya got me! kind of groan! ! I love this one...but can't we please bump the scale up to 20? ? ? ? Hugs, Dee

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R H 02 June 2006

Laughing out loud - brilliant! A compelling tale that had me hooked right til the very end - original and funny, a 10 for sure! Justine: ]

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Esther Leclerc 02 June 2006

hahaha! ! ! Good one, I think, derived from one posted at PIM, right? Nothing funnier than a bullet in the buttocks, unless it's you bleeding of course! Ham bush - you need slapping, Chuck! Est : ]

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