Friday, August 7, 2009

The Baby Comments

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I've been thinking of it for times,
that's why I always am not fine.
Though I know you've always been mine,
It just seemed like we never shine.
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rhona fabi
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 14 September 2009

How sad scenario. Hey 'ate' rona(wow ate rona!) i think you should make a poem about the positive side of the Philippines and a call for telling truth and wisdom. After you wrote and posted the poems, try to advertise it to others and let's see if they like it. Many poets(as of what I know) applauses 'also' to those poems. And if you'll make a romance poem, you can advertise it to teens here in poemhunter and let's see if they like it!

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