Tuesday, August 21, 2012

The Babies.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lie on the back and hold the limbs up,
The biggest of the toes first goes in,
Taste not so good, and then hold the feet,
It is so funny to look through the hole,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Karen Sinclair 22 August 2012

Perfect! really brought tears to my eyes as you have expressed so perfectly how a mother feels observing those first glorious month (even though written through the eyes of a babies...i miss those startled eyes when first a sound is heard oh and the drool and the gurgling but most of all the scent (at the back of the neck) how a mother melts at the scent and the silken sof souls... gosh! guess whos gone all maternal now... lovely piece which make me smile on memories of my three little people...tyvm sooothing piece karen

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