Monday, May 27, 2013

The Awesome Twosome Comments

Rating: 2.0

They fight,
They scream to the top of their voice,
They pull and push each other,
And sometimes even hit without making any noise!
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Kavya .
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Shahzia Batool 17 June 2013

they are life, and the poem is lively, and playful! a treasure!

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Lorraine Colon 28 May 2013

Brings back memories when my 2 daughters were little.They can drive you crazy, but when you see them asleep in their beds at night, quiet and so sweet, all you can do is thank God for them. Very nice poem!

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Kevin Halls 28 May 2013

Nice poem Kavya.Here's a suggestion for you the next time the kids are playing up. Splat them with Custard Pies!

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Wahab Abdul 28 May 2013

wow, this is an awesome poem.. love it.. the theme is modern.. nice to read..10

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