Sunday, October 12, 2014

The Autumn Sonata Comments

Rating: 5.0

-the flower is turning - this is today's game
memory along with hedges - prove to be obscured
the Te Deum of desire is confounded by leaves
as slumber creeps upon the sense shaped
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Professor Plum 15 October 2014

Great! I love how the dashes work within the poem. Unusual, but they DO work. Your work not only sketches an image that's there, but a feeling. This is top notch stuff.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2014

Luck lays by a form....the flower is turning the In poem ‘the Autumn sonata. Very beautiful writing.

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