Wednesday, November 16, 2016

The Autumn Shine Comments

Rating: 5.0

The autumn shine
Glows with the rays
From a tired summer sun
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Lon Brunk
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Chinedu Dike 20 June 2018

Beautiful rendition of words written with clarity of thought and mind. The intricacies of the seasons are aptly captured in the poem. Thanks for sharing Lon and do remain enriched.

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Lon Brunk 08 September 2018

Thank you for your review and your kind words. It inspires me to continue searching for the source that bests relates my feelings and thoughts. It is an elusive lover.

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Menato San 17 November 2016

The Autumn Shine. amazing poem. thanks for sharing

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Lon Brunk 17 November 2016

Menato, thank you for reading and reviewing my poem and especially for the kind words.

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