Wednesday, October 30, 2013

The Autumn Leaf Comments

Rating: 5.0

-It’s farewell time
My dearest leaf!
Break away, fly happy
Then, go to sleep
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Elena Sandu
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Thomas Vaughan Jones 06 February 2014

As I read, the tree is personified to become the Father Figure of the leaf. As in life, the child has to leave home and evolve beautifully elsewhere. Perchance to dream.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 27 November 2013

A lovely autumn statement. Good visuals.

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Valsa George 01 November 2013

A beautiful poem on the falling of the Autumn leaf. Like a parent, unwillingly seeing off his dear child to an alien land with sorrow suppressed, the mother tree asks the leaf to fly into freedom! Great write! ! I invite you to read my poem almost on a similar topic... As the Autumn Runs its Round!

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Kanav Justa 01 November 2013

What a poem.... simply classic.... it was just a leaf.. but you made it so emotional... once Again i say.... what a poem...

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Danny Draper 31 October 2013

This is a very emotional poem and metaphor for letting go and eloquently delivered.

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