Sunday, February 28, 2016

The Autumn Has Arrived Comments

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In the blue sky a few woolly looking clouds of gray
So good to be living on such a nice day
In the sunlit park to where i am standing near
The song of the magpie lark pleasant to hear
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Francis Duggan
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Palitha Ranatunge 28 February 2016

Very beautifully written. I like following lines and they are unique: 'a few woolly looking clouds' 'the first day of the Southern Calendar Fall' 'brown butterflies flying around sunlit flowering trees' 'the flute of the magpie' 'at midnight she quietly flew into the town' Thank you for sharing.

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