Thursday, May 25, 2006
The Autopsy Comments
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Blade number three,
start cutting at the toes
up past the knee
soon hit the Roman nose,
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Preeti - is here!
25 May 2006
Agree with Gina, the last lines can surely be better! Liked the rest~ Preets
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Gina Onyemaechi
25 May 2006
A sharp slice of writing, Herbs. I'd like you to do something better with the last 4 lines, but it's up to you. G.
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7/28/2025 12:49:36 AM # 1.0.0
Funny you should say that. They have already been changed. I like them and they stay. H