Friday, June 7, 2019

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Rating: 5.0

A brick-encrusted building so massive
that it has an atmosphere
a weather system unto itself.
Slow to change from cold to warm
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Jenny Kalahar
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Julia Luber 14 June 2019

Unusual subject of poetry- the thermodynamics of a building. That being just the beginning…then the books are furniture. Great sense of atmosphere and creative sense of construct and place. Great poem!

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Jenny Kalahar 14 June 2019

Thanks, Julia!

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Jenny Kalahar

Jenny Kalahar

Washington, USA
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