Saturday, June 14, 2008

The August Visitor Comments

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The first time I had a rat visitor
I heard scratching at my door
Tap; tap, I heard on my doorstep
Scared I sat before standing up
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hamid kareem
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Lauren Watkins 13 August 2008

You use wonderful words to describe this scene, somehow the whole thing feels rodenty! Loved it!

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Imogen Lee Greene 26 June 2008

Funny and I can feel your anxiety, I hope I never get rats.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 14 June 2008

Cute poem for a rat...Reminds me of the movie 'American tale'....Keep on writing... Cate

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