Wednesday, May 11, 2016

The Audacity To Think Comments

Rating: 5.0

The god above tradition
Is an agent of sedition

Examining that devil as one would the Moon
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Roseann Shawiak 11 May 2016

Amazingly deep and profound thoughts through feelings, lit up my mind like lightening strikes, somehow making sense of all that we do while expanding our sight into another dimension of this life. Totally absorbed my mind and intellect, provoking thoughts out into the open where I can jumble and mix them like a chemist in an inner lab. Wonderful poem, loved it immensely! Is it in line with your thought pattern? Thank you for sharing and many thanks for appreciating my poem, On The Edge Of Every Moment with your comments. RoseAnn

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