Monday, October 17, 2011
The Attempted Escape Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Bolting towards the open feilds trying to elude its grasp
Running wildly past the trees attempting to resist its painful clasp
Hoping it wont capture me as I race through the night
Carelessly leaving a trail; keeping me in its line of sight
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7/23/2025 1:26:38 AM # 1.0.0
Wow! What a great and well crafted write that clearly shows your potential to make to the top of the Poetry World! Trying desperately to escape from a difficult situation is not easy but it can be done. I love the rich imagery and fine wording in this write! I can identify with this write because many times I feel like that and you can see it in my recent posted poem titled: A Dare Mind Escape! This write deserves a 10+++ Keep giving the World more of your talented works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...