Friday, July 20, 2012

The Aswatha Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

By the side of a village road was a huge Aswatha tree.
It's strong wide trunk supported numerous branches,
It's leaves full of life vibrated with cosmic energy.
The roots penetrated deep, as well as extending above ground.
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Valsa George 29 July 2016

At the surface level this is the story of a towering tree that gave shade and shelter to many, but was tragically hit by lightning! At the deeper level, the story of someone... a great ancestor who holds the family together and acts as a moral force to the progeny! Enjoyed the way you have ended the poem with the image of life resurrecting once more from the underground roots of the tree! !

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Savita Tyagi 29 July 2016

Thank you Valsa. So happy that you read the poem and commented on it.

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Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan 13 July 2013

Excellent. This reads more like a thriller novel though...! ! !

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Kasia Fedyk 24 July 2012

Yes, absolutely beautiful and so Divine Savita, I feel it in my soul. Thank you! Love, kasia

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