Tuesday, March 6, 2012

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Down in everybody deep in every soul, theirs always a dark secret left untold.

locked in a dungeon so far away, life is the key that I've thrown away.
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Colten Garrett
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Dave Walker 06 March 2012

A really fantastic poem, really liked it. A great write. Take a look at my poem called, Mental Hospital. A true story.

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Adeline Foster 06 March 2012

Colten: Forget yourself and give us more poems. Try happy poems and see the bloom come out. A poem is not so hard to write. How about Haiku? It only takes three lines with 5 / 7 / 5 syllables. And it is fun, fun, fun. Read mine. Adeline

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