The Ascent Comments

The ONENESS you reach at the end is brought through stages that are beautifully described.You may not be an expert as you mentioned but you know the rudiments well to give needed poetic lines to express the ultimate bliss. Thank you.

When the Kundalani rises though the body and reaches the head, I think, the soul obtains liberation. A deep mystical poem of immense beauty.

I have no words to express my appreciation for this poem! I don't know anything about the spiritual or extra terrestrial dimensions of the phenomenon you are talking of. Yet I know you have written this poem in the height of some etherial experience! As I read this poem, I feel you share Tagore's insatiable thirst in Gitanjali where his longing for the Lord of the world and Heaven is so beautifully expressed! ! 10+++++

Madathil, you have a gift for descriptive and vivid wording. I was rapt by this epic poem. Thanks for sharing