Dominic there are couple of ways to interpret your poem so I'll stick with the obvious one and approach, a most thought provoking and well written senryu and your 'gold to green' is inspired.
10++ and added to my favs.
Take care and keep writing poetry of sheer class.
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Dominic there are couple of ways to interpret your poem so I'll stick with the obvious one and approach, a most thought provoking and well written senryu and your 'gold to green' is inspired. 10++ and added to my favs. Take care and keep writing poetry of sheer class.