Sunday, September 20, 2009

The Artist Comments

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The artist lies in bed
awake and dreaming about
the times she was happy then
and she could see everything again
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Soldier's Wife
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Bullion Grey 20 September 2009

Good layout, and I think I understand it, at least mostly. It has elements of seemingly sadness, as hands were cut. Hands being a symbol of creative action. Good effort, maybe think of a revision in the future(?) Hell what do I know? (nothing) Thank you for your tender ehart and willingness to create, it is always refreshing. Write on, my poet, write on. Bullion Grey

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