With a stroke of the brush
The artist can bring it to life
All the images we see
Are as sharp as a knife
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I agree with Douglas, and you may also, as you seem to suggest in the last two lines. Fast paced and nice rhyming. The poem, I mean. Bri :) Sometimes it may be more useful to NOT listen to the din. Or are you referring to internal din?
I think creativity can be nurtured. I like your rhymes and rhythms.
Release your imagination. Make up your own mind. It's what YOU see that counts. A very thoughtful poem, Mike Tom Billsborough