### The Art-> The Love Child Comments

Picturesque…in concept and vibe…lofty Thanks for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Picturesque…in concept and vibe…lofty Thanks for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Picturesque…in concept and vibe…lofty Thanks for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Picturesque…in concept and vibe…lofty Thanks for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

brilliant sarwar...........well done

You have designed perfectly your words of art.......great form! ! ! 10++++++++

You drew with the words. Excellent write Enjoyed Thanks

You not only create poetry, but you also create figures with the way you write it. That's a rarity.

Quite experimental ways and u r a master at it already.....there is a rythm, a background tune, there is shape and design, texture and marvel of words.....this is mordern poetry at its best! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

A very orignal presentation of the cycle of life in a tasteful write...Aphrodite mood in love....beautiful write +++++10 regards

Interesting structure you make - shaping the poem with words :)

This is art indeed. Very beautiful, Sarwar. You are certainly a poet worthy of the name. Always your friend, Sandra

Art and love child, then Aphrodite was born from the foam of the sea.

Indeed an interesting piece! loved the structure.10

That ZEBRA DANCE sounds, yummy - yummy

very original presentation and language. Great job, Sarwar

a wonderful poem dear Serwer........well penned

great poem, and great tech. ^_^

a child on the way .... invisible love power you create such wonderful images, which are surreal, sensuous, ethereal and also above the level of ordinary almost bordering on a kind of salutation to love and procreation- invisible love power as you put it Sarwar.dream like... 10+++ Mamta

A very wonderful innovative original poem coming from you once again.