Friday, September 26, 2008

The Art Show; Crucified Comments

Rating: 5.0

We’re dressed in our best,
And we’re ready
For the show.
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Ethan Moyer
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Dear young poet Ethan. You have a talent. Though young I give you a 10 (it will take, a week to explain) Beauty, not uncovered but disclosed, revealed. Eat me, says the Poetry. Go ahead, with more rich ideas. Poetry is expecting you to give more and deeper. Thanks for sharing! Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Callie Carroll 26 September 2008

Artists often feel like aliens. You convey that perfectly and painfully. These lines especailly slapped me: 'These people..' and ' I'll explain, But it will take a century.' My Friday night was dry until...

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Goldy Locks 26 September 2008

Intriguing...makes me want to read more, Ethan. And that's what it's about - sjg

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Ethan Moyer

Ethan Moyer

East Stroudsburg
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