The Art Of Love Comments

That TEN from heart niv

‘…there. in the arms of obedience // unmask the emotions of two loving couples...’ A loud YEAH Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

on the contrary where speed meets time and no one knows how dusk meets dawn.................yet the twilight knows the mingling of dusts milling the dreams and desire yet reeling all through.........wonderful write with ingenuity, yet evocatively passionate by imagery, thought provoking too,10+++, thanks fopr sharing

This is great and lovely, lady. fluent in expression.

This is great and lovely, lady. fluent in expression.

This is great and lovely, lady. fluent in expression.

This is great and lovely, lady. fluent in expression.

This is great and lovely, lady. fluent in expression.

Lovely and beautifull poem with wonderful flow

on the contrary where speed meets time and no one knows how dusk meets dawn there..in the arms of obedience It is ultimate endfor the desire to get fulfilled andit comestothe pures souldho long forit for numberof yearstogetit realised.it i s natural coaurse of action and tobe rememebred when one sitsalone in the corner/... lovely write my dear poetess....10 readmine anywhere////