Wednesday, January 11, 2017

The Art Of Love Comments

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You fly with no wing
You breathe with no wind

You see the balck, white
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Baharak Barzin
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Daniel Brick 15 January 2017

This poem strikes me as a partially completed puzzle but the reader has to make the final determination on how to complete it. You have assembled crucial pieces but it's up to the reader make the final decisions. In actions and perceptions LOVERS excel people who are not in love, eg. lovers can breathe without air, ans fly without wings, thus their actions are f-r-e-e! and a-m-a-z-i-n-g! In terms of knowledge they perceive everything. eg. the see black and white, that is the two extremes of color and thus everything in-between So lovers achieve everything that human beings are capable of when their relationship makes two into o-n-e. Those in love will live a heightened existence, because they have stretched out to grasp love and live as if everything they do is an act of love. Excelsior!

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Baharak Barzin 26 January 2017

yes i am quiet agree with what you said, thank you daniel you excites me everytime you leave a comment for me

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Siddartha Montik 12 January 2017

in such simple words an amazing philosophical that.! ! Thank you poet.! !

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Ryson Dsouza 11 January 2017

wonderfully expressed

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