The Art Of Life Comments

An excellent analysis of the complexities of life. Well done.

Beautifully written...

.............excellent Vijay, thanks for sending your message. Cheers Jerry

Sometimes good things in life fall apart to allow better things falling together, thoughtful poem, nice reading it.

Your poem follows a special pattern where each line begins where the other line ends just like the problems of life for which we seek solutions! A nice poem..... enjoyed reading it ! !

thank you for inviting me to read this poem. I like the idea of life being an unsolved record in some Grand Record Room. In this context you may find my poem: Its Been Found - interesting. You are indeed a prolific poet. Keep it up.

I like your thoughts of lie, very true good work keep it up

life is a file like that basically its a rut one get stuck

that is true and you described the life like no one else did it is a master piece honestly nice job keep on writing :)

That is a very good description of the art of life. Somewhere deep inside I believe that our soul knows all the answers, all solutions, but listening to our soul is not an easy thing. Most of the answers I have received came while walking or sitting on the beach reflecting, but i keep searching and try to listen more, lots and lots of questions remaining. The end of the poem is so nice. Thanks for sharing.

It reminds me of Reinhold Niebuhr's quotes: “God, grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.” Good. Keep it up.

well written.. :) indeed life is a file of unsolved records..

Truly words written hear, I like the way of making it a vicious cycle. Merry Christmas! ! !

truly explains the viscious circle of life.. very well knitted poem.. great work

After being digressed in mind (fascinated?) by the formulation of words here I considered the content and heartily agree.

a nice deduction! ! ! no life without problem, no problem without solution! ! !

Like rats going through the skinner box maze, for the cheese - maybe

A well composed poem about the trajectory of life. I enjoyed it and rated it 10!

Very well written. I enjoyed how you compared life to every day objects.