Tuesday, May 6, 2008

The Art Of Being A Mother Comments

Rating: 5.0

A mother's love is unexplainable.
The level of yours, I hope, attainable.
I strive to be,
In all ways, like thee.
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whistle gal
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Daniel Tyler 18 May 2008

The thought behind this is quite amazing. A fitting tribute to your mother, who in my experience is a fine woman. Sir Dan xxx

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Chris Mendros 13 May 2008

An excellent, heartfelt tribute to a fine and wonderful person. Absolutely beautiful.

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Frank James Ryan, Jr. 10 May 2008

This is a perfectly beautiful Mother's Day poem, in honor of your Mom, who my Dad says is a really great writer, like you, as well as a very good friend. So i can only imagine what a super Mom she is as well! Great writing. You should write a lot more.Happy Mom's Day! Lauren Marie Elizabeth xo

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Ron Dragano 08 May 2008

Great write - flows and grows from the heartfelt and genuine - quite a mom and quite a daughter! rd

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Chuck Audette 08 May 2008

Wonderfully written. Loved it! Enjoyed the rhyme scheme and the message is always timely and really hits home! -chuck

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Bridgid Patrick 08 May 2008

A Wonderful tribute to a wonderful woman. I really enjoyed reading this. I sought my soul But my soul I could not see. I sought my God But my God eluded me. I sought my mother And there i found all three I constantly worry about my mother as she gets older Everyday and wonder what i would do without her, I refuse to even think about it. A really great write with a lot of passion and love. Im sure shes very proud of you. Regards xx

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Alison Cassidy 07 May 2008

Such a beautiful tribute to a beautiful red bird. Yes, the fear of impermanence lies like a shadow behind every child's love for its mother. I remember as a wee girl feeling the agonizing terror of 'what would happen if my mother died....' It still gives me goosebumps. When she finally did die, she looked very small - almost like a child. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Debora Short 07 May 2008

What lovely tribute, Scarlett, I am sure, is well blessed with such a sweet a child. God Bless, Debora

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Dee Daffodil 07 May 2008

What a lovely tribute! ! Just in time for Mother's Day too! ! I think your Momma must be proud of you! ! Hugs, Dee

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delilah contrapunctal 07 May 2008

Hi WG this is a beautifully written message of love and gratitude to your dear mom.....I'm sure you are as lovely and nurturing a mother as she is.........Happy Mother's Day to the both of you.....! ! Love, D.

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Donall Dempsey 07 May 2008

That a gal and wot a gal your mum is...ain't it de truth! aaaahhh that's what love does and is! love Donall Donall

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Lawrence Beck 07 May 2008

As one who has dealt with your mom from time to time, I believe that you've done a fine job of portraying her, and written a nice little poem to boot. Larry Beck

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Original Unknown Girl 07 May 2008

That is absolutely beautiful. You captured the spirit of motherhood perfectly. And what a mother to live up to! ! (I see you certainly have your mum's artistic talent!) Good poem - enjoyed. HG: -) xx

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Tailor Bell 07 May 2008

a lovely and thoughtful tribute, indeed. bravo! -Tailor

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Jerry Hughes 07 May 2008

It's refreshing to see a tribute written with love and no hidden agendas. Well done...

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Linda Ori 07 May 2008

Very nicely done, and a fine tribute to a wonderful woman and mother. She could wish for no greater praise than that of an appreciative and loving daughter. That's proof that all her hard work was worth it in the end result. Midnight :)

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Alice Vedral Rivera 06 May 2008

This is such a beautiful tribute to your mother - I know her heart just swells with pride and joy. avr

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Ernestine Northover 06 May 2008

This is so beautiful, I'm so glad your Mother pointed me in its direction. What a lovely way to give such a lovely tribute to your Mother, I would be exceptionally proud if it had been written for me. Very well done indeed, woven with love and sewn with memories and blessings. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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R H 06 May 2008

A warm and tender tribute to a wonderful mum or should I say mom - written straight from the heart this poem shines. justine x

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A beautiful tribute of a piece from one clearly beautiful lady to another whom I love very much. t x

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