The Arrow Comments

Dew was all around to welcome a new morning. Very thoughtful poem is presented. Congratulations that your poem is selected for the poem of the day.10

Excellent piece of writing, Aftab bhai

Superb poem..................

Yeah...It is not possible always to maintain the tradition in a family. Sometimes an incident, good or bad, breaks it. Nice poem. Congrats for the poem of the day.

This is poetic and mystical. At large we fight to break traditions and then we weep for broken traditions. Then again comes the ecstasy of recreation. This is the cycle of creation. Poem is really beautiful to read and leaves an impression. Congratulations for poem of the day selection.

Feelings woven into simple lines! Congratulations.

Beautifully expressed! .... Congrats.... ++++++++++10

To maintain the tradition. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

the same story is told poetically..but I feel sad.. Why the old people are not treated well?