This poem touches the soul... ' calling your name aloud with no response.' Universal experiences set word. I liked the line ' in hand at hearts command '. The words intertwine and dance... solid, stable and at the same time rolling like a gentle wave. I guess it's the combination of alliteration and internal rhyme appeal to me in this line. Nice.
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This poem touches the soul... ' calling your name aloud with no response.' Universal experiences set word. I liked the line ' in hand at hearts command '. The words intertwine and dance... solid, stable and at the same time rolling like a gentle wave. I guess it's the combination of alliteration and internal rhyme appeal to me in this line. Nice.