Sunday, November 21, 2010

The Arms Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Illuminate my soul
As the sun greets the sky
In the morning and closes
The night with a thousand kisses
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Romeo Della Valle
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Ray Schreiber 21 October 2011

This poem touches the soul... ' calling your name aloud with no response.' Universal experiences set word. I liked the line ' in hand at hearts command '. The words intertwine and dance... solid, stable and at the same time rolling like a gentle wave. I guess it's the combination of alliteration and internal rhyme appeal to me in this line. Nice.

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