Thursday, June 22, 2017

The Ark Of Life Comments

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Everyone, in my life, grow a tree,
Trees become forests, and forests lead to animals.
There I like the birds, I hate the gray wolf,
There are countless other unknown animals
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Edward Kofi Louis 27 July 2017

Perhaps love! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Shimizu Mizuhala 27 July 2017

You are so friendly, I will share more poems for you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 July 2017

Life, trees, animals, forest.. all grow in my life, birds, building an ark for them, in the heart, Oh, the ark of life, if I removed you, Can you return to a lovely bird? It is still wandering. My pigeon as a symbol which did not come back. Very nice symbols, original thinking and use of words…… thank you dear poet for this poem.. tony

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Shimizu Mizuhala 23 July 2017

Thank you Tony, your comments made me feel warm, I have the motivation to write more poems.

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