Thursday, September 17, 2009

The Apt Caveat Comments

Rating: 5.0

At mid-noon today
Keeping the sun at its bay
Docile cloud roared and warned;
Where on earth were the grains warmed,
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RUP POKHAREL
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Dom N. Kafley 29 September 2009

hi RUP, this is really fantastic and well penned poem carrying a strong message to save EARTH- our common home..Undoubtly A poem of vision and distinction. i read it, reread it...AWESOME! ! ...10+

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Matt Mooney 25 September 2009

Hopefully we can avoid going into full self destruction mode if world powers take measures to arrest the slide towards further and greater damage to the earth-our home given to us by our Creator.A great poem showing vivid imagination and vision for the future of man.10.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 18 September 2009

strong messages and warning and advisories to Mankind.

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