Sunday, February 10, 2019

The Appointment Comments

Rating: 5.0

''As my time is nearing
the coast of time
soon I may also be
non -existent.''
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Varsha M 06 January 2021

Indeed a rare poem....but cheer up till shun shines over your head and your muscles moves to make you smile please live like a human on cloud nine.

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Varsha M 06 January 2021

I like the way she reminded our temporary stay here And a destined unknown day to finally move....

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Varsha M 06 January 2021

I liked the flow of your thoughts and the visit of little angel

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2019

i esp. like: " But the unknown force can call any one any time just anyone without any fuss " But if waiting becomes too much of a chore, i may take things into my own hands & more. I may take all the OLD, feeble of brain or body, take them to the " Land Of Humans, Shoddy" . bri :)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 September 2019

‘‘Friend come over its fun and frolic here Oh you need not fear''........................DONE by you and JOHN DONNE, metaphysical poet. GREAT POET IS HE, but GOD IS GREATEST, That you must know. Thank YOU, Sir, you never blurr, you are always crystal clear, dear friend, you oft blend........AMEN

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 September 2019

''As my time is nearing the coast of time soon I may also be non -existent.''.............................LOVELIEST UTTERED! I HAVE MUCH RESPECT FOR YOU, IMMORTAL POET, I pray for you that when GOD is calling you to come, you are there READY and WELL, may you send my love for HIM, thank you dear poet, most appreciated NOW by me, after having understood all your metaphysical words..................

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 September 2019

IMMENSE BEAUTY...............................BEYOND DEATH..............................YOU ARE CROONING A FUTURE SONG, MY DEAR POET...........Loveliest APPOINTMENT YOU ever had......true imaginative poem, may YOU HAVE THE GREATEST BLESSINGS ALL TIME GOD´s, with a caring, ¨praying for you, AMEN. MOST BEAUTIFUL POEM, DEAR POET. A 10 Full SCORE for your touching poem

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 February 2019

kindness of all who have appreciated his one is based on reality partial imagery

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Rajnish Manga 11 February 2019

The Poet's Notes are clear about the fact that the poem is based on a true incident. The spirit of the poem remains pivotal whether the narrative is realistic or imaginary.

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Rajnish Manga 11 February 2019

The narrative may be based on imagination but it brings about the reality of life and death which are always driven by uncertainties. And 'That is the best part of the living show'. Thanks a lot, Dear Friend.

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Unwritten Soul 11 February 2019

Yes this is a rare poem, there is a unique persona in this poem that i really feel good when i read it... i think you really play with the mysterious ink...and i love it. i like the question and pondering in this work!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 February 2019

THANK YOU PRABIR JI I ILL SHOW LIFE YOU MAY TAKE OVER DEATH FROM ME

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Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

To have an appointment or the world beyond we have to drop everything we hold onto....New New poem Empty Mind is written on this Emptiness.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 February 2019

OOOOOOOOOO THANK YOU PRABIR JI I ILL SHOW LIVING LIFE YOU MAY TAKE OVER DEATH UNKNOWN FROM ME

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Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

So worry not our fraternity Time is always a mystery those who come must go but when? Even heavens do not know. That is the best part of the living show Very beautiful lines pregnant with essential knowledge...Living and dying and celebrating...life is a celebration... Death is a celebration....every moment is a celebration.....Enjoying moment is life....

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Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

But the unknown force can call any one any time just anyone without any fuss... Unknown is really beautiful dear poet..it is an infinite possibility...death is beautiful...It should be looked with prayerful mind.

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Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

We just look blank into wilderness who is calling us from where She came into my dreams and said ‘‘Friend come over its fun and frolic here Oh you need not fear'' ......I Can only say the Fragrance of the Beyond...

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Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

A very young girl we knew just went into the ops room and said ‘'meet you on the other side.'' The other shore is a meeting place...a shoreless shore indeed...

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Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

As my time is nearing the coast of time soon I may also be non -existent.'' ....it is true dear poet....these lines remind me of a poem of a great metaphysical poet John Done...

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Prabir Gayen 10 February 2019

Very deep and Truthful poem....an appointment with death....a rare poem indeed.....

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Srijita Mondal 10 February 2019

This is one of your best poems..time is always a mystery..those who come must go but when we don't know..

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 February 2019

thank you so true all over the net has been read thanks SM

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