''As my time is nearing
the coast of time
soon I may also be
non -existent.''
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I like the way she reminded our temporary stay here And a destined unknown day to finally move....
i esp. like: " But the unknown force can call any one any time just anyone without any fuss " But if waiting becomes too much of a chore, i may take things into my own hands & more. I may take all the OLD, feeble of brain or body, take them to the " Land Of Humans, Shoddy" . bri :)
‘‘Friend come over its fun and frolic here Oh you need not fear''........................DONE by you and JOHN DONNE, metaphysical poet. GREAT POET IS HE, but GOD IS GREATEST, That you must know. Thank YOU, Sir, you never blurr, you are always crystal clear, dear friend, you oft blend........AMEN
''As my time is nearing the coast of time soon I may also be non -existent.''.............................LOVELIEST UTTERED! I HAVE MUCH RESPECT FOR YOU, IMMORTAL POET, I pray for you that when GOD is calling you to come, you are there READY and WELL, may you send my love for HIM, thank you dear poet, most appreciated NOW by me, after having understood all your metaphysical words..................
IMMENSE BEAUTY...............................BEYOND DEATH..............................YOU ARE CROONING A FUTURE SONG, MY DEAR POET...........Loveliest APPOINTMENT YOU ever had......true imaginative poem, may YOU HAVE THE GREATEST BLESSINGS ALL TIME GOD´s, with a caring, ¨praying for you, AMEN. MOST BEAUTIFUL POEM, DEAR POET. A 10 Full SCORE for your touching poem
kindness of all who have appreciated his one is based on reality partial imagery
The Poet's Notes are clear about the fact that the poem is based on a true incident. The spirit of the poem remains pivotal whether the narrative is realistic or imaginary.
The narrative may be based on imagination but it brings about the reality of life and death which are always driven by uncertainties. And 'That is the best part of the living show'. Thanks a lot, Dear Friend.
Yes this is a rare poem, there is a unique persona in this poem that i really feel good when i read it... i think you really play with the mysterious ink...and i love it. i like the question and pondering in this work!
THANK YOU PRABIR JI I ILL SHOW LIFE YOU MAY TAKE OVER DEATH FROM ME
To have an appointment or the world beyond we have to drop everything we hold onto....New New poem Empty Mind is written on this Emptiness.
OOOOOOOOOO THANK YOU PRABIR JI I ILL SHOW LIVING LIFE YOU MAY TAKE OVER DEATH UNKNOWN FROM ME
So worry not our fraternity Time is always a mystery those who come must go but when? Even heavens do not know. That is the best part of the living show Very beautiful lines pregnant with essential knowledge...Living and dying and celebrating...life is a celebration... Death is a celebration....every moment is a celebration.....Enjoying moment is life....
But the unknown force can call any one any time just anyone without any fuss... Unknown is really beautiful dear poet..it is an infinite possibility...death is beautiful...It should be looked with prayerful mind.
We just look blank into wilderness who is calling us from where She came into my dreams and said ‘‘Friend come over its fun and frolic here Oh you need not fear'' ......I Can only say the Fragrance of the Beyond...
A very young girl we knew just went into the ops room and said ‘'meet you on the other side.'' The other shore is a meeting place...a shoreless shore indeed...
As my time is nearing the coast of time soon I may also be non -existent.'' ....it is true dear poet....these lines remind me of a poem of a great metaphysical poet John Done...
Very deep and Truthful poem....an appointment with death....a rare poem indeed.....
This is one of your best poems..time is always a mystery..those who come must go but when we don't know..
Indeed a rare poem....but cheer up till shun shines over your head and your muscles moves to make you smile please live like a human on cloud nine.