''As my time is nearing
the coast of time
soon I may also be
non -existent.''
A very young girl
we knew
just went into the ops room
and said
‘'meet you on the other side.''
We all stand by the side of the river
when the stream will engulf us
no one ever knows
We just look blank
into wilderness
who is calling us
from where
She came into my dreams
and said
‘‘Friend come over
its fun and frolic here
Oh you need not fear''
So impressed by her great
intense message
as she spoke to me
before she really departed
I felt such a surge
as if she was calling me
She was too young
much younger than us
But the unknown force
can call any one
any time
just anyone
without any fuss
So worry not our fraternity
Time is always a mystery
those who come must go
but when?
Even heavens do not know.
That is the best part of the living show
This is one of your best poems..time is always a mystery..those who come must go but when we don't know..
Very deep and Truthful poem....an appointment with death....a rare poem indeed.....
Indeed a rare poem....but cheer up till shun shines over your head and your muscles moves to make you smile please live like a human on cloud nine.
I like the way she reminded our temporary stay here And a destined unknown day to finally move....
i esp. like: " But the unknown force can call any one any time just anyone without any fuss " But if waiting becomes too much of a chore, i may take things into my own hands & more. I may take all the OLD, feeble of brain or body, take them to the " Land Of Humans, Shoddy" . bri :)
‘‘Friend come over its fun and frolic here Oh you need not fear''........................DONE by you and JOHN DONNE, metaphysical poet. GREAT POET IS HE, but GOD IS GREATEST, That you must know. Thank YOU, Sir, you never blurr, you are always crystal clear, dear friend, you oft blend........AMEN
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
To have an appointment or the world beyond we have to drop everything we hold onto....New New poem Empty Mind is written on this Emptiness.
OOOOOOOOOO THANK YOU PRABIR JI I ILL SHOW LIVING LIFE YOU MAY TAKE OVER DEATH UNKNOWN FROM ME