The Apple And The Worm Comments

If I were still a young one, I would love to hear this story every evening at bedtime. very very nice. Teresa

wowwwwwwww..... Hey this is very creative.. You start the poem as if you are narrating a bed time story, yet as the story goes on you do capture the reader's interest.... this one is in most ways an entertaining read.. A poem that can be enjoyed at many levels.... good.. regards shan

The poem reveals the fact of how to select the ripe fruit! Very interesting!

A tale of grubs and worms and apple trees, a lovely tale, that is unless you are an apple.

How beautiful is this! To tell you the truth I just love it! Worms do have to make decisions about what they eat, just like we do and it is important to eat with their friends too! So this is an insight into the social life of a worm! Andrew, it is the best poem I have read today and your imagination is just great! 10 Karin Anderson

It's always nice to have company when we eat lol, great poem with a sort of message, 10 Lynda xx

An interesting poem Andrew....kind of join the band wagon that's the place to be...nice lesson 10

Andrew, Fine poem, also a good lesson for some.... 10... Tsira