The Aphrodite Comments

An interesting take on sunlight, Well-deserved Poem of the Day

Appreciating nature in a unique style. Great write

You had me soaring with this poem. Sunlight, Aphrodite. I'd take the girl anytime. Great poem.

Excellent poem, nice one, my dear poet!

Nice piece of work...It gives a feeling of divinity...something pure..interpreted in many wayzzz...like motherly touch/ or d one u luv d most..gives u a secured feeling...Keep going sharad :) :) Regards Tarun :)

when we are defeated by ecstatic love, we are born anew!

Nice poem it really got my attention keep it up =}

The new life of every day First melody of every soul

poetic...........................! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

you brought out a divine explanatory thing b/w soporfic state and laziness to still lay on bed. opening lines of sunlight....a true wise twist! !

great.. had a musical touch and a fresh feeling!

Lovely poem, very imaginative.

Love ur use of words..a realy grt poem

I wrote this poem about sunlight- it was interesting to read yours. Prisoner Climbing trees Looking beyond mountains- Memories of childhood days of Wading in a creek and flying a kite- Locked within moments of madness, Sitting in a churchyard Trying to hide from all that was real, Where the rest of the world was the enemy- It was the day that they came and took me away To this place where I never saw the light of the day- Urine stained carpets, Sallow walls and sleepy eyed people Pacing up and down halls toward nowhere- Half a century later I am still the stranger fighting these moments of lunacy, Although I can now see the light of day; Trees have never been greener, I have the key to the world outside and the walls about me are stark white, Decorated with paintings though colorful and intriguing Evoke tears and sobs emerging from within. Skies are blue and trees sway in a gust of wind- The world would appear to be a striking place But the key to veracity and life’s purpose Does not fit the lock that binds my heart, mind and spirit. I could sit in a churchyard and hide and The sky would turn colors before me, as I would pray for some peace of mind - I was once a child, flying a kite, wading in a creek- Today I would hold onto the tail of that kite and let it Take me to another level of consciousness- someplace Within that colorful sky- but I know deep inside I must find the right key that would fit the lock that Keeps me prisoner from serenity and being the person I am inside- That person I hardly know- that stranger to my surroundings, That person fighting a war with herself- climbing a tree towards nowhere- Although urine stained carpets and sleepy eyed people are years behind me now, and Looking beyond mountains I know I have the key to the world outside- I am thankful to be seeing the light of day shining upon the creek- That creek I used to wade in and the sun’s rays shall unlock the key to my Heart, mind and spirit one day, I know-because I can feel the heat embracing me- I can feel that heat drying my tears and in time, I believe- That warmth of the sun shall enter my soul Unlock the door to my mind that contains so much darkness and madness, Set me free, and let the light of peace shine inward…. Claudia Krizay

Sharad, this is a magnificent poem I can feel Light, Love, Angles sing and I am being embraced by all this beauty of your words, How amazing and I just love how she is the sun and nature you feel that brings you peace and A Blanket of Love that you are covered with. Fantastic! ! Thank you. Love and Light.

Aphrodite, warm on me..again Presence of shine, cares mine Bright with the touch not secretly meet Seraph greet helplessly sober me As the warm hold me so tight Aphrodite comes to sit beside Kiss of sunlight over the dark night Left me speechless by your morning light Aphrodite, warm me again ...It is nice poem Sharad especially the last stanza, like it much_Unwritten Soul

So beautiful. you are doing wonderful job

It's like a rising from the bright to the brighter.....An awakening of poetic self.The ray of the sun has opened a new horizon of your talent.Really I can just say Awesome!