The Antipodes Poem by Nika McGuin

The Antipodes

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I crave dreams
as much as I do quietude
they are an escape
from the very same reality
that yields, molds,
and binds them

Last night I dreamed
the black plastic bag
ensnared in whispy tree limbs
finally freed itself, fell
carried off by the wind
to rejoin the world below

Last night I dreamed
I was down in paraíso
life, like a river, was finally
taking course - flowing
in the right direction
I sat indian style on the lush green
~ contenta en paraíso ~

Last night I dreamed
reality was slipping past me
fast, like trees and landscape
passes a passenger seat window
I dreamed reality could be more
like a dream, and dreams more realistic

This morning I awakened
bound again to my waking life
in my backyard, the black plastic bag remained
flapping, restrained like a convict
by its bark laden prison guards

The Antipodes
Sunday, March 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: yin and yang,dream,reality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Believe it or not there really is a black plastic bag trapped in a tree in my backyard. It's been there for about five months now. I guess it bothered me more than I realized because I ended up dreaming that it finally fell out of the tree. Then I woke up and saw it was still there lol. This poem is about more than that, but I'll leave it to your interpretation.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Luber 10 March 2019

" Restrained like a convict" : this is very intense imagery, and a very evocative profound poem about the bounds of reality and one's desire in difference to it. Very good. Thanks.

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