Tuesday, December 22, 2009

“the Antidote Of Pains” Comments

Rating: 2.3

Lying alone on a dark and lonely room,
I’ve had but the sound of silence playing,
No one to talk to, no one will soothe.
Drowning by the tears of despair that flows down my pillow.
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Rakesh Bedi 11 January 2010

very true aira..... a truthful n meaningful conclusion to your poem, dear.......

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 January 2010

Lying alone on a dark and lonely room, I’ve had but the sound of silence playing, No one to talk to, no one will soothe. Drowning by the tears of despair that flows down my pillow. Lying alone on a dark and lonely room, I i loneliness it brings sudden attack and beseize us with all memories.. very delicate stage where one can't express freely.. represented nicely dear....10 read mine....come home...home bound

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