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I find few good things in this write... 'Laughter in the distance' shows happiness is away. Wind blowing cold across the face, the poet shivers- a revelation bitter and sour...first stanza is good In the second stanza, the poet goes reflective again on life’s recent past...proud/ battles won...unafraid/enemies- words go very well complimenting each pair The third stanza lines bring in a sudden saddening thought...perhaps, may be what next...as the wind assures a clear sky after a thunder storm, the confusion gets cleared...out look in life to remain positive optimistic always... Easily one among the best of recent newcomer poems... Well-done, Gauri, a 10+ for this poem of yours...