Wednesday, August 3, 2016

The Annals Of Assur-Nasir-Pal Comments

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Oh, Ninip, god of gods, great hero, chief
And forceful Lord, a god who gives relief,
To those who serve him, from his wrath and ire.
A king in mighty battle who breaths fire
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Bri Edwards 11 May 2018

YIKES! ! ! ! .... I captured them and fed Their flesh, alive, unto the savage wild That roams at night. For those that had defiled My throne I had impaled upon a pole And left to die, reminding all the toll ..... ............I'LL STOP HERE BEFORE I START HAVING BLOOD AND DESTROY THE COMPUTER-USER NEXT TO ME! ! to MyPoemList for now. great job rhyming. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 11 May 2018

LYNN, ok, i just read the Poet's Notes. i guess some other world leaders have sought conquest as the answer, divine or otherwise. ; ( i have about 1/2 hour left on a library computer, so even if i (do) read this poem, i probably wouldn't have 'sufficient' time to comment 'fully' on it. besides i'm not feeling so adventurous today. BUT let me quickly read it once. i hope you are having a GOOD DAY. bri :)

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Lynn W. Petty

Lynn W. Petty

Newport Beach, California
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